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He studied his newest addition, remembering the lady they represented. Her shoes were sleek and shiny, just like her golden hair. Inhaling deeply, he closed his eyes picturing the way her deep green eyes dilated in fear and her full pink lips pressed together suppressing a scream.
When both red heels were cleaned and polished, he reverently placed them on the shelf. He took a few steps back to admire his collection. Next, he needed a pink pair of high heels.
As he put his big black jacket back on, he smiled. Hunting at night was such fun.
98 words
Lillie this is great – a deliciously twisted take on the prompt that absolutely surprised me. I love how we get to know the perpetrator so well in 100 words – and he never utters a word himself. So much implied, so much ambiguity to the nature of his “hunting” and why the shoes are such a draw for him, or what they represent…?
Impeccable work!!
Oh, creepy, creepy, CREEPY! And I’m just about to toddle off to bed. Hello, nightmares! Great job, Lillie. Creepy, but great.
Oooh, he’s scary…love it!
Creepy! I love it!
Brilliant. I can almost see his creepy smirk…
Very atmospheric, and rather claustrophobic at the same time. It made me feel as if the scene in the photo would be from one of this man’s dreams.
Good stuff!